After talking with Clare about the new story, I sent another email to my mentor Denise.
She made notes on my writing to pointe out some potential problem in the animation, so I have to be careful with them.
Because of some composing problem Many of my scene are not able to put in final film
I watched some Marion Auvin’s short animations from Vimeo this week , they always carry simple topics. She has excellent drawing skill and ability of manage timing. Especially how she timing character, which I think make her drawing coming alive. Watching my last animation for Children Society, even if I put as many as in betweens to make acting smooth but it still looks not very animatic. I think it because the timing is too equal.
I have been searching short animation film which has simple concept and story timeline but make a last impression. Lucky you is a 3D animation about 3mins, it tells a simple and sort of common topic- relationship. There are many crazy moments in this film but it makes a strong connection and conversation with audience through actings and music. Two characters have such different personalities we can see that from their opposite reactions when they facing problem. And that all build up by their actings.
I searched the sound designer as well from his website http://ainsworthsound.com/films/
This is another piece by the same sound designer. Very similar style of character design. But tis is the first animation I have seen about gay love. It is so simple, but so touched. All facial expressions tell me whats going on in his head.